Thursday 1 September 2016

Tepaia's Egg 20m sprint Writing

Tepaia @ Pt England School: Egg 20m sprint:





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WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.


Click the link below if you want to read the exciting full story.

 - 20m egg  race


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4 comments:

  1. Eva21 October 2016 at 12:15

    Hi room 9, i like your slide that you made its really cool. Next time
    you could tell us who won the race.
    I also liked the faces you drew on the eggs.
    Thanks Eva

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  2. Anonymous21 October 2016 at 12:24

    Hi my name is Jayden
    I like the way you wrote speech bubbles to talk about the race. I bet you that would of been hard.
    Next step you could you could try do the same track and try and wine.

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  3. brayden21 October 2016 at 12:31

    Hi my name is Brayden I like the way you wrote "oh no you killed me" next time you could write more to describe the race and say who won it.

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  4. Julieanna L28 October 2016 at 10:47

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